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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate a
city
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 centre in 1990 and the developments in the
town
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 centre nowadays.
Overall
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, the
town
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 has shown improvement in house building and the old markets removed and replaced by shopping
mall
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malls
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,
Additionally
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, today there are many walking areas that can facilitate people's transport throughout the
city
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.
Firstly
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, on the south side of the
city
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, there were Houses in 1990 that
were demolish
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were demolished
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 and replaced today with a huge apartment block.
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, in the north direction of the
town
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 in 1990, the markets
such
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 as Cafe, Butcher's,
Grocer's
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Grocer
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 and News
agents's
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agents
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 were removed and replaced in these days with constructed a big Shopping mall.
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, in 1990 were did not have any walking places that bound roads in the
city
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.
In contrast
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, today there are many walking areas between
Apartment
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the Apartment
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 block and the
Town
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 hall at the centre of the
city
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 and from
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Town
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the Town
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 Hall
reach to
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reaching
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 the bank can assist people to transport around the
city
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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