The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.
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The line graph shows the quantity of exported
coffee
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by
Brazil
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,
Colombia
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and
Costa
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Rica
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in Kilograms measurement from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
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,
Although
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these exporter countries experienced some fluctuations during these years,
It is clear that
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the quantity of
coffee
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exported to other countries has a total increase from 2002 to 2012. As the graph illustrates, There are several points that in the same
years
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the amount of
coffee
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exported has a different treatment in
Brazil
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,
Costa
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Rica
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and
Colombia
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.
First
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is in 2006,
that
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when
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Brazil
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and
Colombia
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experienced their
first
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peak
while
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Costa
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Rica
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faced
with
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its
first
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dramatic decrease. Second is in 2008,
that
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when
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Brazil
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continued its slight growth
although
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,
Colombia
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reached
the
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a
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suddenly
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fall and
Costa
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Rica
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's export system improved and increased after a
while
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time. Third was in 2010,
that
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when
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Brazil
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became a bit weak but
Costa
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Rica
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rose continuously and
Colombia
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has
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an
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impressive growth.
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, after these factions between 2002 and 2010
Brazil
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,
Costa
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Rica
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and
Colombia
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stand on their final peeks
Brazil
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is in the
first
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level,
Costa
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Rica
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is in the second level and
Colombia
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achieved the third level of
coffee
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exportation rate in 2020.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, costa, rica, first with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Illustrates
  • Amount
  • Exported
  • Abroad
  • Capacity
  • Trends
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Significant
  • Peaks
  • Troughs
  • Reasons
  • Climate
  • Demand
  • Trade policies
  • Compare and contrast
  • Fluctuations
  • Economic conditions
  • Agricultural developments
  • Unique elements
  • Production scale
  • Market strategy
  • Global coffee demand
  • Agricultural technology
  • International trade agreements
  • Competitiveness
  • Quality
  • Reputation
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