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the table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries

the table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries
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The table shows the daily
cost
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 of water per
person
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 in five countries based on the minimum requirement per
person
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 of 11.5 litres.
Overall
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, Tanzania has the highest
cost
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 at 6.4 cents per
person
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,
while
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 the US has the lowest at 0.85 cents. Uganda follows Tanzania with a
cost
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 of 4.1 cents,
whereas
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 Pakistan, the UK, and the US have significantly lower costs. Back to details, water is more expensive. In Tanzania, the
cost
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 accounts for 5.7% of a
person
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's daily wage, followed by Uganda at 3.2%. Pakistan's
cost
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 is lower at 1.1%,
while
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 the UK and
US
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the US
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 spend only a tiny fraction of their daily income on water at 0.013% and 0.006%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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