The map bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)

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The maps illustrate the

town

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of Lakeside in 2000 and how it developed in 2009.

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, it can be seen that the

town

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of Lakeside in 2009 witnessed a dramatic change with more facilities and activities for people.

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with,

according to

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the

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in 2000, we can see that the housing area which is located in the north-west witnessed no change in lakeside in 2009.

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, the derelict warehouses were replaced by the car park. The most interesting difference

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is that in the middle of the map, the old

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was destroyed and new offices

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, they

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built and

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university. In the south, we can see that the residential area is placed in the shopping centre.

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, they extended the industry and made it bigger.

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to that the housing area was damaged in 2009.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

139 words

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The map bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both adults and children. What are the reasons and what can be done?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree to above statement?

In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.