The map bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)

The maps illustrate the

town

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of Lakeside in 2000 and how it developed in 2009.

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, it can be seen that the

town

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of Lakeside in 2009 witnessed a dramatic change with more facilities and activities for people.

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with,

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the

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in 2000, we can see that the housing area which is located in the north-west witnessed no change in lakeside in 2009.

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, the derelict warehouses were replaced by the car park. The most interesting difference

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is that in the middle of the map, the old

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was destroyed and new offices

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, they

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built and

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university. In the south, we can see that the residential area is placed in the shopping centre.

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, they extended the industry and made it bigger.

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to that the housing area was damaged in 2009.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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139 words

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