The chart below shows what History graduates did after completing their undergradudate degree course from a university in the UK. The table shows the sectors these graduates were employed in within six years of graduating and their average incomes.

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The chart illustrates the categories for the things

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majors did, after graduating from a UK university. The table highlights which sectors they chose that they got a job within 6 years of graduation and the ratio of their salary.

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, the ones who majored in

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, mostly got a full-time job

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part-time postgrad studies were preferred the least.

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, other sectors had the highest proportion. Meanwhile, being an archaeologist was chosen as the lowest by the

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graduates. Looking at the data in greater detail, the biggest gap was between full-time work and working on part-time postgrad studies. The percentage of

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majors who started to work full-time was 56%.

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was followed by part-time workers, which was significantly lower, 15%.

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lower number of part-time studies for postgrad

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only 4 per cent. The table chart shows the percentage

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working in sectors that were not mentioned the highest percentage with 37.

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, its income was not the top. Solicitors took the lead with 57.000 sterling and it was ranked as the third most preferred

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of 18. Interestingly, despite being the top chosen job, other career choices and archaeologists earned nearly the same amount of money.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The chart below shows what History graduates did after completing their undergradudate degree course from a university in the UK. The table shows the sectors these graduates were employed in within six years of graduating and their average incomes.

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