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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

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Respected sir, Hope you are doing well. I am Santhoshkumar, living in your flat no 34/2 for the past 10 months. Actually, I got transferred to Boston from next month.
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 our contract, I have to leave the flat after one year. But
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 want to leave the flat two months earlier. Please consider
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 and cancel our contract. I am willing to pay the rent and fine if it is necessary. Currently, I am working as a physiotherapist in Nevada. Fortunately, I was promoted
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senior physio and I had to move to
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the Boston

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 branch. I worked really hard for
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 job. Please consider my proposal and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks in advance Regards, Santhoshkumar

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking your letter into clearer paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea for better clarity.
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Make your request more polite by using phrases such as 'I would greatly appreciate it if...' or 'I kindly ask for your understanding in this matter.'
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The letter has a polite and formal tone, which is appropriate for this context.
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You provided a clear reason for your request, which strengthens your case.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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