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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

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hello sir/mam My name is Amarpreet
singh
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Singh
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. I have been living at the
apartment
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 { CLOCK TOWER 14 APT NO 4321} that I rented from your agency.
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 the duration of
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apartment
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the apartment
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 is
one
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 year
but
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apply
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unfortunately I would have to leave before
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the
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last
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 two months. I really apologize for any
inconvience
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inconvenience
 that
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this
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will
couse
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cause
 by leaving
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apartment
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the apartment
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 sooner than
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contract
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the contract
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.As per
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contract
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the contract
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 which
was begin
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began
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at
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in
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 2024 April 30th supposed
be
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to be
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 ended
at
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in
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2025 April is going to end
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on feburary
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feburary
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february
 28 , 2025 . I already sent you the recent pictures of the
apartment
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 by mail which
might
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apply
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you will receive
with in
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within
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one
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 week . Even though
at
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apply
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the
apartment
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 nothing is damaged
but
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apply
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still you can come on 26
february
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February
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 to check in I will be
availble
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available
.
Actually
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Actually,
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 I
am
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was
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supposed to work at my company for
one
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 year but unfortunately
due to
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emerge
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emerging
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my
work place
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workplace
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moved me to another location
thus
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 I would have to break
this
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contract
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 in order to join at another location. I am ready to pay
penalities
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penalties
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 for
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contract
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the contract
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 break and
hoping
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hope
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 to receive
my
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the
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rest of
security
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the security
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 deposit which is 2000$ within
next
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the next
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one
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apply
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month . I hope you
would
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will
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 understand my
satution
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situation
saturation
. Thank you , YOUR faithfully.

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to structure your letter with clear paragraphs. Start with an introduction, followed by your request, and then explain your situation.
Task Achievement
Make sure to clarify the dates in your letter more clearly. For example, mention the start date and emphasize the early termination.
Coherence and Cohesion
Be careful with spelling and grammar, as it can affect the overall professionalism of your letter. Consider revising for clarity and accuracy.
Task Achievement
You clearly stated your situation and the reasons for needing to leave the flat early.
Task Achievement
Your polite tone and willingness to cooperate with checking the apartment were positive aspects of the letter.
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