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You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Describe the presentation Explain why you cannot deliver the presentation on the scheduled day Request a different date for your presentation You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
the
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 letter to request you to postpone my
presentation
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 on Tuesday,
beause
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because
 of
the
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my illness. I have almost finished the content body of the
presentation
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 as we discussed in our meeting,
morevover
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moreover
 I have incorporated the
relavant
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relevant
 photograph and demo videos in the deck.
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Presentation
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 is pending with alignment formatting and peer review , which I was planning to work on
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the weekend. Unfortunately, I have
affected
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 by
severe
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a severe
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 throat and eye infection
from
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since
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friday
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Friday
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 evening,my eyes got red and watering
while
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 seeing the light of the laptop screen and
its
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 heavily irritated so I took
the
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eye
drop
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 and some medication for the throat infection for
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last
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the last
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 two days. If possible, I would request you to postpone the
presentation
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 to Tuesday so that I will complete
rest
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the rest
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 of the work in
effective
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an effective
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 manner. Thank you for the prompt response
for
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this
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 request and hoping to see you on Tuesday. Kind regards, RK

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Task Achievement
Be mindful of spelling errors, such as 'beause' instead of 'because' and 'the my illness'.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider improving the organization of your paragraphs to ensure each one clearly conveys a single idea.
Task Achievement
Clarify your request by stating a specific date you would prefer for the presentation reschedule.
Coherence and Cohesion
You effectively describe the content and preparation of your presentation, which shows your commitment to the task.
Task Achievement
Your expression of gratitude at the end conveys a polite tone.
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