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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart gives information about the manufacturing levels of fuel types
such
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petroleum
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, natural gas, and coal in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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, throughout the period, the production levels of
petroleum
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 and natural gas witnessed growth,
whereas
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 coal experienced a decrease. From the outset, starting at around 90
energy
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unit
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 in 1981, the amount of oil produced by
petroleum
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 saw a significant growth to 140 in 1986. Despite a considerable decrease to 100
energy
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unit
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 in 1991, the amount of
petroleum
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then
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 recovered to 140 over the period.
Furthermore
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, the proportion of coal oil manufacturing started in 80, a proportion
then
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 halved to approximately 38
energy
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unit
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. After increasing to 60
energy
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unit
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, the amount of coal experienced a moderate decline, reaching around 37
energy
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unit
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.
In contrast
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, starting
in
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with
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 40
energy
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unit
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 in 1981, the proportion of oil manufactured by natural gas increased significantly over the period, reaching 100
at the end
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 of 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, energy, unit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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