The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries for the period 1960-2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries for the period 1960-2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line charts present data that compares the rate of daily
smoker
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and the
amount
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of
alcohol
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consumption in three countries from 1960
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2000.
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,
it is clear that
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at the end
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of the duration, the rate of
smokers
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reduced in both countries
while
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the
amount
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of
alcohol
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increased. Starting with the percentage of daily
smokers
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, all three nations recorded the highest number of individuals who smoked every day in 1960. Where
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Hollandians
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Hollandian
smokers
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were around 60%, followed by the Japanese, at nearly 50%
smokers
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, and
lastly
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the Americans at 40%. By 2000, the
amount
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of daily
smokers
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in Holland and Japan dropped to under 40%. The
smokers
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in the USA witnessed the largest reduction to around 20% in 2000. Turning to the
amount
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of
alcohol
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consumed, in 1980, each individual in Holland drank about 12
liters
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of
alcohol
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, and the Americans about 10
liters
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per person. By 2000,
this
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amount
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had reduced to 10 and 8 respectively. The
amount
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of alcoholic beverage consumed by a Japanese was between 2 liters or below
through out
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the years given.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, alcohol, smokers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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