The government should invest more in public transportation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, as cities continue to grow, both in terms of population and area, the traditional modes of

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are proving inadequate.

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some people argue that government funds should be allocated for upgrading road systems and motorways, I would assert that public

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is the first priority to be invested in.

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, as people in developing countries are becoming wealthier, they tend to purchase more private

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for both personal and professional use. The appreciable rise in

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private vehicles is one of the reasons leading to

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congestion during rush hours.

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, investing in public

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could largely alleviate

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persistent problem by reducing the number of private vehicles

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simultaneously on roads.

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, employees who use public transport

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as buses, elevated railways or trams to commute from their

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to

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their workplace

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will no longer be stuck in

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jams or other problems.

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, focusing on upgrading reliable and efficient public

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, the government would encourage citizens to leave their

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at home.

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shift will probably reduce the pressure on infrastructure;

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,

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for road maintenance or replacing

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lights significantly drops, facilitating

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of investment for other areas.

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, countries deciding to invest more in public

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reap environmental rewards. As private means of transport produce a large amount of exhaust fumes, especially petrol vehicles,

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atmosphere

is gradually being demolished. By providing a viable alternative to

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, public

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could help to reduce gas emissions and

carbon

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footprint of urban areas. Take,

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, a single bus

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replace multiple

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on the road,

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, releasing lower amount of contaminant gases into

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, reducing

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footprint of each

passengers

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organised public

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can act as a precursor to fostering economic growth, because it can help people to commute easily to their workplace, providing them with more time to work and relax and limiting the

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likelihood

of arriving to work late.

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will incentivize workers to work more efficiently and eagerly,

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improving productivity for their companies. In conclusion,

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there are other areas that require attention, I strongly agree that the government should invest more in public

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. Public

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will be a good remedy for easing

traffic

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jams, air pollution and growing economy.