The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play four different instruments.

The bar chart provides information about the figures for school children who learned to play instruments

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as

piano

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, drums,

guitar

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, and violin in the years between 2005 and 2015.

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, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of school pupils who played

guitar

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,

piano

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and drums witnessed a growth throughout the period, the reverse is true for

violin

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sector.

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,

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of the period,

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guitar

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the guitar

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group

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the

piano

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,

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learned by higher figures

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to

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.

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with, starting at the same proportion around 10%,

piano

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and

guitar

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both experienced a significant increase and share a similar pattern.

Piano

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reached 20% at the start of 2010,

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guitar

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group at 18%.

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of 2015,

guitar

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numbered 40%, and

piano

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38%.

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, starting at approximately 5% in 2005, drums stood out at the same level in 2010, but

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increased noticeably to the end of 2015, reaching 10%.

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, starting

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10% in 2005, the percentage of pupils who learned violin, saw a considerable decrease over the period

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and reached 5% in 2015.