You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport. However, you are going to the airport to receive him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain that you will meet him/her at the airport say what you have planned for your friend write some important things that he/she might find useful

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Dear Adam, I am writing

this

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letter to feel excitement about your upcoming visit during

this

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holiday. I am personally

come

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coming

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to take off you from

airport

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the airport

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and you

not

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do not

did not

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have to worry about the

transpostation

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transportation

. I think the flight tickets are reasonable

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apply

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these days and

weather

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the weather

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is good here. So, there is

not

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chance to get

cancel

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cancelled

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flights. I have made a different plan for you like visiting many famous places

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as sightseeing, visiting local attractions and special activities like dining out and attending events. The most famous highlights are particularly

loooking

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looking

forward to, which might

inlude

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include

personal places of interest, nature parks and cultural spots. The useful information includes, regarding local currency, 1991 is

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the emerguncy

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emerguncy

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emergency

number and public transport is available for any type of trips they might take on their own during your stay.

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, bring some

woolen

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jackets, socks,

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and sweater

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sweater

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sweaters

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which are necessary as per the weather

condition

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conditions

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in my city. I am so

curious

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excited

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to see you soon! Warm Regards, Lisa

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coherence and cohesion

Be mindful of grammar and word choice to improve clarity. For example, 'personally come to take off you' can be revised to 'I will personally pick you up.'

coherence and cohesion

Ensure you have distinct paragraphs for different ideas, which helps improve the flow of the letter. Consider separating the plans from the useful information.

task achievement

Try to refine some phrases that may sound awkward or unclear, such as 'the most famous highlights are particularly looking forward to.' This phrase could be simplified for better understanding.

task achievement

Keep the writing tone friendly and inviting, and remember to check for minor spelling errors for a polished finish.

positive

The overall tone of the letter is warm and inviting, which is perfect for a personal letter to a friend.

positive

You’ve successfully conveyed your excitement about the visit, which adds a nice personal touch to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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