The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.

The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.
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The pictures illustrate two cutting instruments created from
stone
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which belong to an early period and a later period of human history. They were made using the technique where the
stone
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is broken off into small pieces.
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, it is seen from illustrations that people started making tools more accurate and sharp,
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to the early period.
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, they made changes in techniques leaving specific material at the bottom of the
stone
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, so it looked like a water drop, after that, it was easier to hold. 1.4 million years ago, it
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shown that the process of making tools just started, and communities did not know for sure how to make them.
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, the
stone
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from the first picture does not have a figure as clear as the
stone
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that was made 0.8 million years ago. After 600000 years, the folks learned how to make instruments more convenient, and changed their form so it reminded water drops.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stone with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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