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The below graph shows the population of Japanese in the past, present, and future trends and table informs the number of people aged over 65 years old in 1950, in 2005, in 2035, and 2055

The below graph shows the population of Japanese in the past, present, and future trends and table informs the number of people aged over 65 years old in 1950, in 2005, in 2035, and 2055
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The bar graph illustrates the
number
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 of
people
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 in millions of Japanese in the past, present, and future, and the table displays the figure of the population aged over 65 in 1950, 2005, and 2055.
Overall
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,
according to
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 the bar chart, the
number
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 of
people
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 fluctuates during the whole period. Regarding the table, it shows that
people
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 who are over 65 years old witnessed a sharp increase from 1950 to 2055.
According to
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 the bar graph, the
number
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 of
people
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 stood at 84.1 in 1950, followed by a significant rise to reach a peak in 2005 at 127.8.
However
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, in the following years, they estimate that the population will decline to 86.9 in 2055.
According to
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 the table it shows that in 1950 the population stood at 4.1 and in 2005 was around 25.7
however
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, in the following years they predict that the
number
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 of
people
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 will increase dramatically to 41.0% in 2055.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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