THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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This
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report derives from the above bar chart which enumerates the changes
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that occurred
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in the total
number
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of computer science
students
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at a UK university from 2010 to 2012. As an initial overview, the majority of the
students
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are
British
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throughout the period regardless of their gender. Not only is
this
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point clear, but
also
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the proportion of the foreign
students
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consistently moved up in the entire period. Notably, male
students
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were more than women learners in 2010, but that changed in 2011. The figure
of
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the women
students
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increased and reached 44
while
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the male pupils were 38 only.
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, the
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of
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men
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male
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learners dropped in 2011 and reached 24, but it started increasing again and became 43 in 2012.
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, the proportions of both
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and international
students
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were approximately the same in 2011.
Besides
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, the
number
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of female
British
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students
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jumped in the whole period, as it was rising until it hit a peak in 2012 with 45
students
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. On a final note, the
number
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of the international ladies pupils was steadily increased.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, british with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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