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The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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A glance at the bar charts illustrates the participation level in education and science in emerging and developed
regions
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 in a decade, between 1980 and 1990. Based on an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that there was a big gap between developed
countries
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 and emerging
regions
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for
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in
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 different aspects,
such
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 as mean
years
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 of education,
a
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the
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 number of scientists and technicians, and
total
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the total
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 amount of research and
development's
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development
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 expenses. For
initial
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the initial
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 figure which is
average
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the average
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years
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 of schooling, industrialised
countries
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 attained
the
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apply
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first place and it grew from 1980 by 9
years
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 to 1990 by 11
years
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. Meanwhile, emerging
countries
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 achieved the
last
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 position, but it grew from 3
years
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 to 3,5
years
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 between 1980 to 1990. For the number of scientists and technicians, there was a big gap between these
countries
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 in a decade. Developed
regions
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 depicted the first place and enhanced significantly from 41.000 individuals to 70.000 individuals.
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, emerging
countries
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 grew from 10.000 people to 19.000 people. For research and development expenses, there was
also
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 an enormous gap between both of these
regions
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.
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, the incremental of developed
countries
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were
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 really significant from around US $150
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billions
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billion
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 to US $350
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billions
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billion
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.
On the other hand
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, the emerging
countries
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 dropped from around US $50
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billions
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billion
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 to US $10
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billions
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billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words regions, countries, years, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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