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The four charts illustrate the purposes of travel to the UK via different airports in 2016.

The four charts illustrate the purposes of travel to the UK via different airports in 2016.
The pie charts compare data about the goal of having a trip to the UK from 4 various airports in 2014.
Overall
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, it was important that the highest percentage of all airports other than
Gatwick
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 hit visiting friends and family.
According to
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 the diagram, Visiting family and friends, the main reasons that most passengers travelled from, composed exactly half in Luton,
then
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 45% in Stansted, 37% in
Heathrow
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, and 305 in
Gatwick
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.
Thereafter
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, History was the second cause and most of the fraction was for
Gatwick
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 at 54%;
then
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 Lutin,
Heathrow
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, and Stansted respectively constituted 35%, roughly a half, and 30%. The graph demonstrates that the proportion of business aim was the maximum at
Heathrow
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, which reported 28%;
then
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Gatwick
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 and Stansted made up the same fraction at 14% and Luton formed 1% less than these 2 places. Other composed 4% of
Heathrow
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 travellers the minimum one for other airports at 2 per cent.

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