The table illustrates the number of cell phones(Nokia,Ericcon, Samsung, Motorola, Apple) sold in millions between 2006 and 2012
Overall
, the Linking Words
predominate
position Correct your spelling
predominant
initially
belonged to Samsung. Linking Words
Whereas
, Linking Words
it
Correct pronoun usage
its
oppose
could be clearly Replace the word
opposition
be
seen Unnecessary verb
apply
it
soon Ericssio and Motorola had significantly lower.
After analysing the table, it was clearly seen that Samsung showed a steady growth Correct pronoun usage
apply
so
117 million in 2006 and 396.5 in 2012. Change preposition
of
In
Linking Words
contrast
Motorola phone in 2007 it was 210, Add a comma
contrast,
then
it dropped rapidly by 182.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, with 2.3 million millions in Linking Words
2006
Apple Add a comma
2006,
show
a rapid increase, 135.8 in 2012. Wrong verb form
showed
However
, Nokia was the second most smartphone seller company, Linking Words
345
Change preposition
from 345
into
2006 to 335 in 2012Change preposition
in
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