The chart presents the number of international students enrolled in four major Australian universities from 2010 to 2020. Key Details: University of Sydney: Had 25,000 international students in 2010, rising steadily to 50,000 in 2020. University of Melbourne: Started at 20,000 in 2010, with moderate growth to 35,000 in 2020. University of Queensland: Enrolled 15,000 students in 2010 but had only slight growth to 18,000 in 2020. Australian National University (ANU): Had the lowest number of international students, increasing from 10,000 to 15,000 over the

The chart presents the number of international students enrolled in four major Australian universities from 2010 to 2020. Key Details: University of Sydney: Had 25,000 international students in 2010, rising steadily to 50,000 in 2020. University of Melbourne: Started at 20,000 in 2010, with moderate growth to 35,000 in 2020. University of Queensland: Enrolled 15,000 students in 2010 but had only slight growth to 18,000 in 2020. Australian National University (ANU): Had the lowest number of international students, increasing from 10,000 to 15,000 over the
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart presents the number of international students enrolled in four major Australian universities from 2010 to 2020. Key Details: University of Sydney: Had 25,000 international students in 2010, rising steadily to 50,000 in 2020. University of Melbourne: Started at 20,000 in 2010, with moderate growth to 35,000 in 2020. University of Queensland: Enrolled 15,000 students in 2010 but had only slight growth to 18,000 in 2020. Australian National University (ANU): Had the lowest number of international students, increasing from 10,000 to 15,000 over the
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of international students enrolled in four
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Australian universities during the period of 2010 to 2020. Over a decade, The
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of Sydney accepted the highest count of new international students
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of Sydney rose about 100
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from 25,000 to 50,000 during the period. Meanwhile, the
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of international
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of Melbourne (UniMelb) reached 35,000 in 2020, striking moderately from 20,000.
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of Queensland (UQ)'s international
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acceptance experienced slight growth about only 20
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. That growth percentage was even lower
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acceptance in Australian National
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(ANU), which had the lowest
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of international
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during that period. About 15,000 international students enrolled in ANU in 2020, increasing from 10,000 in 2010. In conclusion, the highest
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and percentage of international
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enrolled in Australian
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belong to USyd. Meanwhile, the lowest percentage was in
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of Queensland

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