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More and more plastic waste is polluting the world’s city, countryside and ocean. What problems will it cause? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

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These days unfortunately
individuals
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 do some behaviour, which is harmful to the
environment
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 , and
have
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 some bad effects like,climate change,Global warming,water
pollution
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,land
pollution
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 ,and destroying ecological balance.To stop all of these, we should set harsh
punishment
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. On the one hand,we can set financial punishment.
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, when
community
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a community
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 make issues for the
environment
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,
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or
put
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waste
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 in the
environment
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 ,they have to pay huge money as a penalty.
This
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 rule can avoid plastic
waste
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.
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, we can use volunteer work as a retribution.
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,
individuals
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 who do resilient
waste
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, have to work for some institute that recycles trash
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or does something that helps to keep our earth clean.Still,some
family
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families
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 don't care about the
environment
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 and have these bad habits .
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,the government
,
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can set some rewards for
individuals
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 who recycle their
waste
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,and separate wet and dry litter,etc.
This
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 reward can inspire
public
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the public
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 to do more work for the
environment
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.
As a result
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 ,we can reduce
pollution
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.There is another idea for solving these problems,people can
usage
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 cotton
bags
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instead
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 of resilient
bags
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Furthermore
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,
this
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 habit can aid in preventing plastic
waste
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.
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,stores and shops can
operation
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 cotton
bags
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 for their products,or family can use cloth
bags
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 for their grocery products,they can bring their
bags
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 with themselves always ,and after shopping they can wash their cloth
bags
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 and use them more than 100 times. In conclusion,
individuals
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 and
Government
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the Government
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 have to collaborate with each other to save our habitat and prevent plastic
waste
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.
Due to
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,pull up global warming ,and conservation of biodiversity.
However
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,we have to take some steps to
protecting
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 our planet from
pollution
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 and global warming.

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coherence
Ensure that each paragraph flows logically into the next. Consider using linking phrases to improve the overall flow of ideas.
task achievement
You have presented a range of ideas for addressing plastic waste, which demonstrates an understanding of the topic.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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