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The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphic chart gives information about the estimated number of people who are illiterate in the world by
last
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 year’s data. The chart is divided by region and gender,
whereas
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 the numbers are shown in percentages. Developed countries have the lowest percentage at about slightly above 0% with a thin difference between both genders.
On the other hand
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, South Asia has the highest illiteracy population which is dominated by females with almost 60% . The number is almost double from male percentage which only reaches about 35%. The condition in which many more men than
women
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 are literate is
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 shown in Arab States with only under 30% of gentlemen who are not able to read but the number is dramatically high that over 50% of
women
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 do not have skill in literacy.
Overall
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,
women
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 in the world have higher illiteracy rates than men. That condition might appear because there was a time when
women
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 were not allowed to get a proper education.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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