The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the consequences of an examination of people who have habits about purchasing and drinking
coffee
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tea in five Australian urban areas.
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, in all places except Adelaide, more people went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea than bought instant and fresh
coffee
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. In Adelaide, going to
cafe
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cafes
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and buying instant
coffee
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were almost equally common. Most residents in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban and Hobart all visited a cafe to purchase
coffee
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or tea, at approximately 60%, 62%, 55% and 63% respectively,
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just under half of residents in Adelaide did so. These five cities
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had roughly half of individuals buying instant
coffee
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as opposed to Hobart and Brisban, peaking
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55% and 54%. In comparison, the
percantage
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percentage
of humans who purchased fresh
coffee
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was never as high as 50% in all of the five cities, compared to Brisban and Hobart, which both showed a significant upward trend
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reaching nearly 52%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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