The diagram below shows how salt is removed from the sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how salt is removed from the sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how salt is removed from the sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration shows how seawater is being treated to remove salt and impurities before entering the
water
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supply system.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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this
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is a continuous cycle.
Moreover
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, there is a need for four chambers in
this
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process. Starting with the first two sections,
this
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is the pre-treatment filter chamber and the
membrane filled
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membrane-filled
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compartment. Saltwater from the sea flows into the filter chamber where it can either continue into the
membrance
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membrane
remembrance
compartment or return back into the sea. In the second chamber, the
water
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molecules are forced with high pressure through a membrane that helps remove impurities and salt. Afterwards, less concentrated
water
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moves to the next section
while
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the seawater concentrate is returned to the sea. Turning to the
last
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two chambers,
this
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includes the post-treatment zone and the storage area. Filtered
water
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from the membrane
are
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is
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treated with lime, chlorine, and fluoride in the third section to make them more suitable for drinking.
Next,
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the treated
water
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is stored at the storage area where it will later be integrated into the
water
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supply system.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • desalination
  • intake
  • pre-treatment
  • filtering system
  • reverse osmosis
  • semi-permeable membrane
  • dissolved salts
  • impurities
  • post-treatment
  • minerals
  • palatable
  • distribution
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