Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic: Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Gökalp What up dog how are you doing if you ask me something in the way for me ı hope it is the same for you The fact is that I am sorry but you cannot stay with me because ı should

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for a job.

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night my brother called me and he said we should

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job. And we will stay there for one week

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reason you cannot stay with me but if you

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here I can find somewhere for your stay. I know a hotel a good place it

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or you can stay with

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stay with him and he would be happy about it. How you want we will do it. But you

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ı am at home after the job.

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you can come here and stay with me I am sorry again but

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I am waiting for your answer I hope we meet soon Take care of yourself

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Ensure that your essay has a clear introduction that outlines your position on the topic. This will guide the reader on your argument from the beginning.

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Develop your main points more thoroughly. Make sure to explain your reasoning and provide adequate support for your opinion, which will make your argument more persuasive.

coherence and cohesion

Organize your ideas into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single main point to improve clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that you have a concluding paragraph that summarizes your argument and reinforces your position. This helps to provide a clear closure to your essay.

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Your enthusiasm and personal touch make your writing more engaging and relatable, which is an excellent quality in communication.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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