The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graphic shows the amount of families in the US sectored by income values among the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, there are five income groups: less than $25,000; $25,000 - $49,999; $50,000 - $74,999; $75,000 - $99,999; and $100,000 or more. At first glance, all the
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sectors showed significant movements throughout the study.
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, It seems that
poorest
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the poorest
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people have
been
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increased steadily as well
the
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wealthiests
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wealthiest
.
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, the middle classes showed similar variations
among
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over
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the three years. Looking at the details, households with the lowest
earns
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earnings
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experienced a steady rise as it
hit
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initially
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stared
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started
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at 25
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millions
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million
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of
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items in 2007, to
consequently
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around 28
at
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in
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2011 and
finally
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decreased slightly to 27 approximately.
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, the group of $25,000 to $49,999
also
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witnessed the same trend
as well as
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poorest
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the poorest
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sectors, since their results were 26, 30, and 38
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millions
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million
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of
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houses, in the same
years
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order. The next two
profits
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profit
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clusters, which are part of the middle class, showed steady variations
since
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from
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$25,000 to $49,999 and $50,000 to $74,999
got
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the the next results: 21 and 14
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millions
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million
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of
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units in 2007; in 2011 the same cluster got 21 and 14; and 21 and 15
millions
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of households in 2015 respectively.
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, the cluster with
highest
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the highest
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earns
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earnings
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soared dramatically as they began at almost 30,
then
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, hit a slight low at 27 but
at the end
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of the period reached a sharp surge of 37
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millions
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million
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of
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apply
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units.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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