You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

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Respected sir, I hope you are doing well. I would like to inform you that

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I am resigning from

the

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current post as Executive

manager

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Manager

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. I am really

greatfull

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grateful

for working with

this

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prestigious company and taking

this

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decision with

heavy

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a heavy

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heart. My brother had an accident

last

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week and was admitted

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hospital. Doctors are suggesting to take him to Singapore for

further

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treatment. So, I am leaving

this

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job to look after my brother. I hope you understand the situation. We are leaving from India on 22nd August 2025. After admitting my brother

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hospital

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the hospital

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will apply for

part-time

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job to meet the expenses. I need to stay in Singapore

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for a

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year for

the

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treatment so I

could not

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continue

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current job. Please consider my

resigning

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resignation

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proposal and settle my incentives as soon as possible. I am looking forward to your prompt response Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Wed Feb 12 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider making your opening more formal and clear about the purpose of the letter.

task achievement

There are some grammar and spelling mistakes. Proofreading your letter can help with clarity and tone.

task achievement

The letter addresses all the required points.

task achievement

Your explanation for leaving the job is touching and personal, which adds a human element.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.