Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals. Real change can only be made at the government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent decades, environmental degradation has been

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pressing issue worldwide. Some people argue that only governments can tackle

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issue since individuals are not capable enough to handle it. Even though authorities and other decision-making

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viewpoint because everyone

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to work together to protect the environment. Authorities and decision-making institutions can implement regulations and rules that can lead to significant

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improvements.

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, individuals' efforts should not be overlooked since their actions can be effective in environmental protection too. government can regulate - rules and

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Your essay needs to provide a clear and specific argument for your viewpoint. Try to elaborate on your ideas with thorough explanations.

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Make sure to provide solid examples that support your points. Think of specific examples from daily life or case studies.

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Make sure to include a more detailed conclusion that summarizes your main points and reinforces your position.

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You have successfully identified both sides of the argument, which shows an understanding of the complexity of environmental issues.

Coherence and Cohesion

The introduction establishes the topic nicely and clearly states your position, which is a good start.

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Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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117 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental sustainability
recycling
reducing waste
conserving energy
climate change
deforestation
pollution
implement
enforce regulations
carbon taxes
renewable energy incentives
industrial emissions
international agreements
Paris Agreement
greenhouse gas emissions
education
public awareness campaigns
environmentally friendly behaviors
role of corporations
cumulative effect

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