Some people think traffic and housing problems in big cities can be solved by moving companies and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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recent years,

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and housing

problems

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brothering

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the

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big cities, the rent of housing

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high and always have

traffic

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peak hours, these issues may

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the

citizens

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.

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, some people would suggest that moving the

companies

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and their employees to the

countryside

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can solve the

problems

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. And I agree with

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point of view.

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with, the

traffic

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traffic

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jam

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/ the

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of

taxi

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taxis

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are setting high/ the public transport

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too crowed and related

problems

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. When the

companies

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moved

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move

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away, the

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of

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traffic

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system

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systems

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in big

citizens

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decrease,

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, the

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of the transportation fee may become

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drop,

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living costs of big citizen

citizens

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also

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getting

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down. Still, about the

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house

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houses

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are lacking and the

price

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of houses

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high mostly because of local

employee

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employees

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. The trend of recent days is " If people want to seek for high salary, they have to work in big

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example, when students

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from university, they

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leave their

family

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families

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in

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countryside

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the countryside

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and move to big cities to find

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job

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jobs

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. Meanwhile, if the

companies

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moved to

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countryside

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the countryside

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, the employees

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stay in their

hometown

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hometowns

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,

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demands

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of

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for

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housing would

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decrease in city centers, so the

price

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of housing

wpuld

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would

be getting

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down.

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there

are

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a lot of

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advantages

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of moving

companies

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to

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countryside

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the countryside

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.

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, there are still some

protential

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potential

issues. I hope that the

problems

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could

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be solved after

dfferent

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different

policies.