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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart presents the percentage of households in owned and rented
accommodation
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 in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the proportion of owner-occupied housing consistently increased,
while
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 the percentage of rented
accommodation
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 decreased significantly over the period. The two trends converged around 1971. Rented
accommodation
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 began at nearly 80% in 1918, representing the highest proportion throughout the period.
This
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 figure experienced a sharp decline, reaching a low of approximately 35% by 1991. A slight recovery followed, resulting in a figure of around 35% in 2011, significantly below its initial level. :
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, the percentage of owner-occupied dwellings began at just over 20% in 1918.
This
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 figure showed a consistent upward trend, surpassing the proportion of rented
accommodation
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 in 1981 and reaching approximately 64% by 2011.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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