Today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or Antarctica. What are advantages and disadvantages of it

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Nowadays lots of tourists come from many countries in the world

for doing traveling

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to travel

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. They

traveling

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travelled

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to Asia, Europe, America, Austria, Africa

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Antartica

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Antarctica

. They

likes

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visiting

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visit

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place

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places

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with

the

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apply

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difficult conditions like

Sahara

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the Sahara

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desert or

Antartica

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Antarctica

otherwise

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Australia or Lombok in Indonesia which is Asia

also

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Paris in Europe.

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is happens

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happens

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cause

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because

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they think it will be helpful for the people in that country. The

advantages

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advantage

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firstly

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that

place

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the place

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they might come

could

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get more income from them.

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that

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apply

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income can

helps

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help

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poor society.

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Moreover

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it can fix the facilities in that place and make it better for tourists. But the

disadvantages

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disadvantage

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is more

rubbishes

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rubbish

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in there if they cannot manage it. They should

builds

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build

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many hotels or

acomodation

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accommodation

so they'll be ready for the

tourist

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tourists

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language

Make sure to use correct grammar and spelling. For example, "tourists" instead of "tourist" and "are living" instead of "are visiting."

structure

Provide a clearer structure by having distinct paragraphs for the introduction, advantages, and disadvantages. This will help organize your ideas better.

development

Expand on your examples. Instead of just naming places, explain how tourism impacts those specific areas.

content

You identified both advantages and disadvantages of tourism in difficult conditions, showing an understanding of the topic.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

132 words

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or Antarctica. What are advantages and disadvantages of it

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in some countries university students live at home with their families, whereas in other countries, students should attend university in another city . Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes? What are the solutions?