The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the differences between

library

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libraries

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in the past and now.

It is clear that

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there were several changes in the library over 20 years old.

For example

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, there are new services and many places

exchanged

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exchange

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their locations.

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, some things are removed like

table

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tables

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and chairs in the central

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area.

In addition

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, some rooms disappeared and new things appeared.

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with, the tables and chairs were removed and the space

become

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became

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empty. The

childern's

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children's

book in the southeast changed into

lecture

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a lecture

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room. In the east of the place adult fiction books remained and added information desk below it.

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the next

desk

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desk,

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there

was

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were

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self_service

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self-service

machines.

Enquiry

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The enquiry

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desk

removed

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was removed

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and replaced by

cafe

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a cafe

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in the southeast.

On the other hand

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, CDs, videos,

computer

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and computer

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games joined

togather

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together

and changed their place to

southwest

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the southwest

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. There

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are

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two

sofa

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sofas

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in the northwestern.

Moreover

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, there

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are

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storytelling events between them. Children's and adult fiction books are next to each other in the

west

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West

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions? Provide examples and explanations.

People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative effect on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.