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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented graph compares the
number
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 of American households by their wages every year during a specific period of time (2007-2011-2015). The vertical axis measured the
number
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 of households in
million
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dollars
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,
whereas
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 the horizontal axis showed the changes over time.
Overall
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, the amount of households was relatively variable during the given years.
On the other hand
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, the highest significant increase in annual income was in 2015.
According to
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 the given diagram, it can be observed that the
number
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 of people who get 100000
dollars
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 or more was almost 30
million
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. From
then
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 on, it experienced rapid growth to approximately 33
million
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 in 2015. By taking a closer look at the data,
it is clear that
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 the
number
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 of people who get from 50000 to 74999
dollars
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 or more was just above 20
million
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,
then
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 it remained stable at the same level until 2015.
However
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, in 2007 the
number
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 of people who earn less than 25000
dollars
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 was 25
million
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. The figure witnessed a slight rise to 28
million
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 in 2011 and reclined to 27 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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