The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. Angsa

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The following maps illustrate how the

center

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centre

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of the city's library changed in the twenty-year time from 20 years ago to now. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent that the library has changed and is more developed compared to the past, primarily focused on

the

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entertainment, and upgraded technologies.

According to

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the figure above, there was a computer game place for children, which was evacuated to the southeast side of the library today, installed a new area for kids to enjoy reading

books

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and storytelling events in the northeast. On the northwest side, a lecture room has been built, and the most exciting area for customers is a cafe which is constructed now. As for the remaining, the adult fiction

books

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Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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exchanged for all reference

books

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which

locates

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are located

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between the computer room and

youngsters'

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the youngsters'

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room.

Finally

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, tables decreased in size to change place and

located

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were located

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among adult fiction

books

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and a new self-service machinery.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. Angsa

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