The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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The presented graphs compare the causes that led to reduce the productivity of agriculture and the impacts of those in three various areas including: North America, Europe and Oceania during a specific period of the 1990s.

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, over-grazing had the most significant cause to fall the productivity of agriculture,

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others had the least cause.

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, Europe had the highest ratios of causes of degradation over time.

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the given diagram, it can be observed that overgrazing took place as the main reason with more than one-third of the proportion, followed by deforestation with a level of 30%. By taking a closer look at the data, it can be seen that in North America the land was degraded by a small fraction, 5% in total.

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, in Europe, the main cause of degradation was deforestation with a level of almost 10%,

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over-cultivation was 7.7% of the proportion.

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, over-cultivation didn’t affect Oceania during the given years.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Agricultural productivity
Deforestation
Over-cultivation
Overgrazing
Soil erosion
Nutrient depletion
Land degradation
Soil compaction
Fertility
Preventive measures
Sustainable farming practices
Environmental impact
Economic implications

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