The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
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The bar graph compares the data about
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the distribution
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of global car-sharing schemes in two distinct years, 2008 and 2016, showing changes over time.
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,
regions
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like Europe and North America have a high level of percentage ,
while
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other illustrates very small percentages.
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, usage increased in all
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over the period , but European countries showed a decline. In 2008 , Europe was a leader in global car-sharing usage, accounting for less than 60% of the total. North America ranked
second,
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with a third of world use. The other three
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had approximately equal results, accounting for about 10% in total. By 2016 , the percentage of European countries in car sharing decreased gradually ,reaching roughly 30%. Meanwhile, car-sharing schemes grew sharply ,hitting 50%. Similar to past years ,
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such
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as Asia, Australia and South America account for a very small proportion ,
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in total little more than 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words regions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distribution
  • Global car sharing schemes
  • Changes over time
  • Geographical regions
  • Percentage share
  • Popularity and availability
  • Trends and policy impacts
  • Emerging markets
  • Diversification
  • Even distribution
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