The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Beka

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of Malaysian men and women who engaged in physical activity in 2010, categorized by different ages.
Overall
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, the data reveals that male engagement in physical activity was higher when they were young,
whereas
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females tended to be more active when they were middle-aged. The most active sex was considered to be ladies over the lifetime span. In their 15–24, men were notably more active than women, with around 53% of males engaging in regular exercise compared to approximately 48% of females.
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trend decreased moderately after 25, where participation levels became around 40% till 54. Meanwhile, the proportion of female activities exceeded that of males after the age of 25 onwards till 54, showing a peak of 54%. After the age of 55, men's active lifestyle increased slightly, rising from 45% to 48% in their older ages. Old women in their mid-fifties,
on the other hand
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, became less active, dropping from 52% and representing almost the same rate as other genders.

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