The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Beka

The bar graph illustrates the percentage of Malaysian men and women who engaged in physical activity in 2010, categorized by different ages.
Overall
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, the data reveals that male engagement in physical activity was higher when they were young,
whereas
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females tended to be more active when they were middle-aged. The most active sex was considered to be ladies over the lifetime span. In their 15–24, men were notably more active than women, with around 53% of males engaging in regular exercise compared to approximately 48% of females.
This
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trend decreased moderately after 25, where participation levels became around 40% till 54. Meanwhile, the proportion of female activities exceeded that of males after the age of 25 onwards till 54, showing a peak of 54%. After the age of 55, men's active lifestyle increased slightly, rising from 45% to 48% in their older ages. Old women in their mid-fifties,
on the other hand
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, became less active, dropping from 52% and representing almost the same rate as other genders.

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