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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The chart illustrates that
people
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 have different habits of buying and drinking
coffee
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 or
tea
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 in those five countries.
However
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, there are
similarity
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similarities
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of
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in
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 activities about buying and consuming
coffee
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 and
tea
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 at
restaurant
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restaurants
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 in
that
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those
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 cities. In
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last
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the last
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 4 weeks, the number of
people
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 who went to a cafe for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 is
higer
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higher
 than other habits, except
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people
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for people
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 in Adelaide. Both Hobart and Melbourne reached the highest number of
people
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 that consuming
coffee
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 or
tea
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 in the cafe.
Second
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The second
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 activity that
people
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 prefer to do is
bought
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buy
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 instant
coffee
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.
In addition
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, Hobart has
highest
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the highest
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 number of
people
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 who bought instant
coffee
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.
Then
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, followed by Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne and Sydney. From the
chart
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chart,
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 we can
concluded
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conclude
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 that many
people
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 prefer to go to the cafe for
coffee
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 than bring
fres
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fresh
coffee
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 and instant
coffee
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, tea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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