You are going going to take a short holiday and you have want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there right to the tourist information office in your letter explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about praises

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Dear

sir

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I hope

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will find

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you well I wanted to book the best hotel in our public to get mine I went to

zoom

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the

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best resort in Uzbekistan and had the rest it's impossible to describe

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place the air is so pleasant the breeze is so gentle

the breeze is so gentle

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the waterfalls are so beautiful the scenery there is very beautiful and our good relax and enjoy nature I want to go there again in the summer became it has a very gentle Breezer I want to have a great time on the cake location

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summer

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are

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very cheap and you can easily spend a week 10 days or more a day at a resort can cost from 0 or 5

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per person Yours faithfully savannah

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Make sure to include specific information about your travel dates and requirements for the holiday apartment.

coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your thoughts more clearly, ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single idea.

coherence and cohesion

Check for grammatical errors and repetitions to improve clarity.

task achievement

You expressed your enthusiasm for the place, which helps convey your feelings about the holiday.

suitable writing tone

The letter has an overall warm tone which is suitable for a correspondence with a tourist information office.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

139 words

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You are going going to take a short holiday and you have want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there right to the tourist information office in your letter explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about praises

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowdays, many people complain that they have deficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Today, many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of their life, but few of them can achieve it. What are the problems in trying it? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep, What problems can lack of steep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?