The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant.
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The provided pie chart depicts the rate for used renewable and general
energy
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sources in Germany and France in 2009.
Overall
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, one can notice that in France they solely relied on nuclear power,
while
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in Germany conventional thermal
energy
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was in the most demand. Let us look at Germany
first,
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in the year 2009 they mostly leaned on Conventional thermal electric power, with an amount of 59,6%. Throughout the year, 23% of electricity was generated from nuclear,
whereas
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17,4% was renewable
energy
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. Namely, biomass, wind, hydroelectric, solar, and geothermal, with rates of 39,3%, 36,9%, 17,7%, 6,1%, and 0,0%, respectively.
In contrast
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, the highest percentage of electricity sources in France was Nuclear, 76% sharp.
While
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conventional thermal
energy
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had the lowest percentage at 10,3%. As for renewables, throughout the period 13,7% of
energy
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was generated, 80,5% of which was hydroelectric. Wind and biomass had a close rate at 10,5% and 8,1%, respectively.
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only 0,9% was Solar
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. Geothermal
energy
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had the lowest rate, once again, at 0,0%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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