The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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This
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diagram illustrates how bricks are manufactured and distributed.
Overall
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, there are 7 steps starting from collecting materials and ending with delivering the final products.
To begin
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with, clay, the raw materials are obtained through a digger.
Then
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filtering it with a
matal
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metal
grid to separate rocks and sands. The former products remained on the grid
while
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the latter transferred through a roller and to be mixed with water and
shaping
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Next,
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this
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mixture
either
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shaped into a rectangular brick with mould or a wire cutter. After that, these bricks are removed the moisture by leaving it in the drying oven
up to
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for
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1-2 days.
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these dried bricks known as
Kiln
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Kilns
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are burnt in two different chambers: moderate and high at 200-980
degree
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degrees
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Celscius
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Celsius
and at 870-1300 degree Celsius, respectively. From
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, they are remained in a cooling chamber
about
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48-72 hours. Once the final products are cooled down, they are ready to be packed and delivered to several
destination
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by
a lorries
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a lorry
lorries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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