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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The current tables illustrate how the amount of money earned from selling
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 with Fairtrade labels changed in five different countries, namely, The UK, Switzerland,
Denmark
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,
Belgum
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Belgium
 and
Sweden
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 in the years of 1999 and 2004. In an
overall
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 view, both fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 and banana
sales
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 rose in all countries from 1999 to 2004 except for
Sweden
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 and
Denmark
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 which not only stayed approximately steady in
coffee
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sales
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 but showed a decreasing trade in the selling of
bananas
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 too. The UK sold 1.5
million
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euros
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 of fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 in 1999 which, with a steep slope, increased to the top of 20
million
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euros
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 making it the greatest rise compared to the other countries.
the
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sales
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 of
this
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 kind of
coffee
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 almost doubled in Belgium and Switzerland from 1999 until 2004 respectively from 1 to 1.7 and from 3 to 6
million
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euros
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.
Denmark
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 and
Sweden
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 did not experience a significant change in their
sales
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 in
this
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 period. The most dramatic growth in
sales
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 of fairtrade-labelled
bananas
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 from 1999 until 2004 belongs to the UK which increased by more than 5 times over
this
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 period.
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, the
sales
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 of these
bananas
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 had an increasing trend in Switzerland from 15 to 47
million
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euros
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 and
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in Belgum
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Belgum
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Belgium
 from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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 too.
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, the money earned from these
sales
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 decreased
to
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by
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 half in
Denmark
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 and
Sweden
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, denmark, sweden, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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