The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant:

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This

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These

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pie charts illustrate the percentage of online shopping sales in four different sectors in Canada in 2000 and 2010. Electronics and appliances

as well as

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home furnishings showed a decline in their sales. The most obvious decline was in

home

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the home

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stuff field which showed a

decreased

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decrease

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by

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of

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10

percent

Change the spelling

per cent

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.

Moreover

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, electronic devices and

appliance

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appliances

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dropped in 2010 by 5 percent from 35 % to 30%.

On the other hand

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, there was a flourishment in the other sectors in 2010 compared to 2000. In 2010, food and soft drinks

increase

Wrong verb form

increased

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by 10 %, it went from 23 to 32

percent

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per cent

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,

whereas

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video games raised about 6%.