You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant mnager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear sir or madam I just wanted to thank you for the great experience my friends and I had at your restaurant one day. We were celebrating and everything was perfect. The food was delicious especially the dish and the service was excellent. The staff was friendly and made us feel very welcome. We really enjoyed our time and will definitely visit again. Thanks for making our celebration special.
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sincerely Azizbek

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task achievement
Try to include more details about the food and specify which dish you enjoyed most.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure to use proper paragraphing to enhance readability. Consider separating each main idea into distinct paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and warm, appropriate for a thank you note.
complete response
You expressed gratitude effectively, which is a key component of such letters.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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