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The chart below gives information on the precentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the precentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates
of
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the rate
UK
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the UK
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giving
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gives
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money
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 to
doner
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donors
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 by range for the years between 1990 and 2020.
Overall
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, in 1990 showed an
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upward trend
. It
also
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 showed some fluctuations.
while
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 in 2010 experienced increasing
trind
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trend
.
At
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 the beginning , given
money
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 in
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the years
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years
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year
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2010 the
precentage
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percentage
 was lower .
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 of
this
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years
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year
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become
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 higher. In 1990 ,
spant
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spending
money
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in
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young
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a young
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age
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 was about 16%.
furthermore
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 higher than group 26-35
age
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 of approximately 24%.
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 it rose to doner
money
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 almost 41
percent
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per cent
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 in
age
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 51-65.
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,the figure decreased gradually to 35
precentage
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per cent
 in
aged
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those aged
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 65 and over . and in
the
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1990 giving
mony
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money
around
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the generatione
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generatione
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generation
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age
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aged
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18-25 was 16 rate . and showed grew fast rate for doner
monay
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money
 almost 40 %. and
in
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 the end of
period
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the period
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 it
lowest
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was lowest
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 for
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age
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ages
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 above 65 and more

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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