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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and table illustrate a comparison between 5 different professions in the UK in terms of salary and working
hours
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 per week. All figures are in pounds sterling.
Overall
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, the increase in
salaries
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 for all professions is very minimal with underground drivers having the highest
salaries
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 in the beginning and after 3
years
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 even though they work the least amount. Meanwhile, nursing is the
least paying
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least-paying
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 job. Comparing
salaries
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 when starting and after three
years
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, Underground driving is the highest paying job starting at £50,000 and increasing slightly to a little over that.
While
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 policemen's
salaries
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 starting point is at £20,000, it does not improve much in 3
years
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 despite working for longer
hours
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 of about 40
hours
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 a week.
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, nurses are paid the lowest with a starting salary of around £15,000 and a barely noticeable increase of a little under £20,000.
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, firefighters and teachers work the most compared to the other professions with an average of 55
hours
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 a week.
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, salary-wise, firefighters are paid better than teachers at around £40,000 in the first year and an increment of around £2000 after three
years
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, salaries, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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