The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.

The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
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The provided line graph highlights the average
number
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of British commuters using a car, a
bus
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, or a train on a daily basis over a 60-year period, ending in 2030.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the total
number
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of commuters has increased steadily over the years, and
this
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growth can be seen in the
number
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of
travellers
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using a car or a
bus
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as a mode of transport and is predicted to do the same until 2030.
Conversely
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, the
number
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of people taking a
bus
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to go around has witnessed a steady fall, expecting to continue
this
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trend in the future. In 1970, the starting figure for the proportion of
travellers
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travelling by car was as high as 6
million
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, making it the most popular vehicle to go around.
This
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number
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only increased over the years, reaching an ultimate high of 9
million
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people.
Similarly
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, the slightly over 2
million
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travellers
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taking a train to move around, being the smallest proportion of the 3, followed an upward trend over the years, expected to be the second most used vehicle by 2030,
that is
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by 5
million
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people.
On the other hand
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,
while
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the initial
number
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of
travellers
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using a
bus
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was double that of
train
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, it remained steady for only a decade and
then
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started a downward trend, which will be continued well into the future, becoming the smallest proportion of commuters to take one of the 3 types of vehicle.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, bus, travellers, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commute
  • mode of transport
  • fluctuating trend
  • downward trend
  • public transport policies
  • preferences
  • railway infrastructure
  • economic factors
  • environmental factors
  • technological factors
  • sustainable commuting
  • noticeable increase
  • investments
  • dominance
  • propensity
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