The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.

The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Two given maps demonstrate how Paradise
Island
Use synonyms
has changed from the past
by
Change preposition
to
show examples
the present.
Overall
Linking Words
, the
island
Use synonyms
has been converted into a resort
instead
Linking Words
of a research station. Significant changes concern infrastructure
as well as
Linking Words
housing.
To begin
Linking Words
with the
west
Replace the word
western
show examples
part of the
island
Use synonyms
, there were two marketed changes.
Firstly
Linking Words
, the pier was extended so that it
can
Wrong verb form
could
show examples
accept bigger ships.
Secondly
Linking Words
,
Scientific
Correct article usage
the Scientific
show examples
Station was replaced by a new hotel complex and swimming pool on the north side. In the past, the central part of Paradise was uninhabited, but now plants have been cut down and a food area
was
Wrong verb form
has been
show examples
opened. It includes a restaurant, BBQ area and Cafe on the east part. On the
Add a comma
north-west,
show examples
north-west
Correct your spelling
northwest
show examples
the beach became available for swimmers
while
Linking Words
on the other side of the
Use synonyms
island
Add a comma
island,
show examples
tourists could visit the new viewpoint.
In addition
Linking Words
, the coastal cycle path was opened so that it allowed tourists to get more quickly to rest zones and accommodations.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: