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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the timing of phone calls made in the UK, categorised into three types, namely local, international and mobile, from 1995-2002.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that maximum
time
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 was utilised on local calls,
whereas
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 the least was noted on mobiles (all calls). The
time
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 of national, international and mobile calls increased over the
time
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 period. By observing the chart it is observed that the
minutes
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 (
billions
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) spent by people on local-fixed line was over 70, which inclined until 1999 and reached by one and half an hour (
billions
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).
However
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, in 2002,
this
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 figure was noticed at 71
minutes
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. Whilst, 38
minutes
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 was utilised by British people on national and overseas in 1995 and after half a decade
this
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 timing was recorded at 50
minutes
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 (
billions
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). But in the
last
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 2 years,
this
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 amount of
time
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 rose by 10
minutes
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 (
billions
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). Furtherance, a minimal
time
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 was observed for mobile calls in 1995, which constantly began to escalate and surged up to 20
minutes
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 (
billions
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) in 2000. Eventually, after two years
this
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 timing reached at more than 40
minutes
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 (
billions
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).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, minutes, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phones
  • local calls
  • national and international calls
  • billion
  • minutes
  • growth
  • decrease
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • overtake
  • peak
  • plummet
  • steady
  • significant
  • minor
  • chart
  • period
  • comparison
  • category
  • data
  • illustrate
  • reveal
  • indicate
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