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Some people believe that artificial intelligence (AI) has the power to improve our lives. However, others are worried that it could have a negative impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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spinning
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encouragement
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surviving
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artificial intelligence, we as a human should only use it
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artificial intelligence should be spreading worldwide with
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coherence and cohesion
Your essay needs a clearer structure. Consider using paragraphs to separate different points and ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single aspect of the discussion.
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Ensure that your introduction clearly presents both sides of the argument and includes a clear thesis statement. A strong introduction sets the tone for your essay.
coherence and cohesion
Check for spelling and grammatical errors. Improving your writing mechanics will enhance clarity and understanding.
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You provide a balanced view on the topic and present arguments for both sides, which shows an understanding of the discussion.
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Your examples, particularly about AI's impact on education and emotional support, are relevant and illustrate your points well.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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